Flames of Betrayal Blurb....maybe

Flames of Betrayal is the first in a new action series I'm writing. The novel itself is basically completed, it's in the beta-reader stage. Now comes the hard part...the dreaded blurb. I think writing a blurb is one of the hardest things to write as it's so dang short. Something I'm not good at anyway. I've been working on one all weekend and have finally gotten one that I think is pretty good...well, at least it's shorter than my blurb for Roarke's novel so that's saying something. I've listed it on the Createspace Preview Gallery to get some ideas on whether it's grabbing enough. Hop over and take a peek. https://www.createspace.com/Preview/1062127 In the midst of finding a suitable cover...oh for an unlimited budget or a decent once of drawing talent.